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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 4, 2014 19:38:03 GMT -5
Changed the name so you do have a choice.
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 4, 2014 19:40:44 GMT -5
Waiting in two decisions before I start the next story.
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 5, 2014 12:01:27 GMT -5
All decisions are in. Give me a couple days to write out the results!
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 7, 2014 10:00:02 GMT -5
Story should be out tomorrow!
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 8, 2014 19:49:05 GMT -5
Here is part two. I would to add that I delayed deaths early so everyone can get the option to make a few decisions, which was different from last time. But these early decisions affect your likelihood to survive later in the game.
Story time:
The van slows down at an aggressive pace, launching several of the passengers out of the seat.
Henry: Do it now, damn it!
Steve, in the back, delves into his suitcase full of weed. He opens the back window and prepares to throw the weed out. He pauses, and stares deeply into the weed.
Steve: Aw hell no.
Steve closes the window and shoves the suitcase under the last row of seats, stuffing clothes and other bags around it so the suitcase is out of sight. He even tucks himself under the seat, hoping the cop doesn’t see the passenger just riding in the back.
Jessica and Johnny roll down their windows and toss the joints out of the van. Tara and Mandy throw their doobies out as well. Thomas, Jorge, Fat Matt put out the joints and stuff them in their pockets. They frantically grab their belts and strap it around themselves.
Vanessa: We are about to pass the cop, everyone just chill.
The group is taken over by an awkward silence as the van passes the cop car. Several seconds go by and van approaches the bridge. The van is halfway through when the group begins to celebrate!
Thomas: Aw f*** yes! Mexico! HERE WE COME!
Thomas pulls Jessica in for a dirty, wet, French kiss. Tara looks on from behind with jealously. Henry, who is trying to focus on the narrow bridge, looks into his rearview mirror.
Henry: Damn it! He is coming!
Jorge turns around and looks out the back window.
Jorge: He is right! Everyone play it cool!
The police sirens draw near as Henry gets the van to other side of the bridge. He pulls off to the side of road, which is practically a hill that is over 30 feet tall. The van stops and everyone is quiet. Henry can see the cop getting out of his car and walking over.
Tara: Oh he is smokin’. What a hunk!?
Jessica: Tara, shut up!
Deputy Isaac approaches the front window. He leans onto the van, and takes off his hat. He takes off his glasses and stuffs them in his front pocket.
Deputy Forte: I noticed you came to a rather hasty halt back there. Thought I would pull you over and check if everything is okay. May I see your license and registration, please?
Henry reaches into his pocket to take out his driver’s license. Vanessa pulls the insurance out of the glove box and reaches over Henry to personally hand it over to the officer.
Vanessa: (smiling) I hope this helps.
Deputy Forte smiles back, taking in Henry’s license.
Henry: Everything is fine here, I just noticed we were going a little too fast and I slowed down to prevent anything from happening. We are all pretty stoked to get to our resort in Mexico.
Deputy Forte: Mexico, huh? I remember when I went to Mexico for my senior trip. Lots of weed and booze…and the most beautiful latina women in the world...speaking of weed…what is that smell?
Everyone freezes, with eyes widening open and jaws dropping open.
Deputy Forte: I need everyone to get out of the van please. I am searching you all one by one.
One by one, Forte pats down the teens. He finds joints in the pockets of Fat Matt, Thomas, and Jorge. He arrests all of them and shoves them into the back of his cop car. Lastly, he checks Steve. He finds joints in his pockets, shoes, underwear, and even in his dreads. He arrests him and puts him in the front seat.
Henry: Officer, please. You even did drugs on your trip to Mexico! How can you arrest them?
Jessica: How are we supposed to get them back? We can’t go without them.
Deputy Forte: Look, here is the deal. I have to take them to the town and check them in. You can meet me there, and post bail. They can go to Mexico and party, and then come back for their trials. But don’t let them get caught…no one will like that they are out of country when a trial is upcoming for them. I will see y’all there.
Deputy Forte gets into his car, only to drive off. He speeds off into the distance.
Tara: What the hell? He didn’t even what town to go to?!
Henry: This whole trip is ruined. God damn it. There is no way in hell they will be able to get into Mexico, they will check for that information.
Johnny: We can just sneak them into Mexico.
From behind them, loud motorcycle hums can be heard. The teens turn around, only to find the biker gang from before pull up from behind them. The teens back up into the van as the bikers get off their bikes and approach their groups.
Leader Joe: So you punks get busted with your weed. How sad…I guess you wouldn’t mind if we take what’s left?
Henry: Back off man. I don’t think it is smart of you to attack us if we refuse to give it you.
Leader Joe: Ya think so? No one comes around these parts! The nearest residence around here is that big white house down that hill.
Joe points down the hill behind the van, and the teens look. Down the hill lies a mild wilderness of emptiness and sand. Beyond the sand lies a two-story white house that rests in a dry, tall grass pasture.
Leader Joe: So…I guess you wouldn’t mind rethinking my request for your stash?
Jessica: We don’t have any. The cop took Steve, who had what was left. He threw out his huge stash back before the bridge.
Leader Joe: I don’t like liars. If you are all lying to me…that means trouble.
Mandy: Didn’t you hear her? She said we don’t have any left!
Leader Joe: Then I guess you wouldn’t mind it if we check your van then, huh? Hey dude, go check out the van. Come on man, get your gun and keep your eyes on these kids, in case they try to leave or pull something funny.
Man goes to his bike to pull out his sawed off shotgun. Joe pulls out his .44 magnum. Man aims his weapon at the group, making them all uneasy. Joe slowly adds bullets to the chamber of his gun, smirking at the kids. Dude goes into the van and checks everything, tearing open suitcases and throwing clothes out of the van. This awkward situation goes on for a few minutes.
Dude: AHA! Check it out Joe!
Dude hops out of the van holding a suitcase. He opens the bag, and dumps several large bags of weed out onto the road. The bikers all begin to laugh.
Jessica: God damn it Steve!
Henry: I swear, I told him to throw the suitcase out! I thought he did!
Johnny: Just take it and leave!
Leader Joe: Oh no…you liars are not going to get off so easily…
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Story 2 is now over. Here are the decisions: Fatt Matt: Do you try to talk the cop out of taking you to jail, or do you attack him?
Thomas: Do you try to talk the cop out of taking you to jail, or do you attack him?
Steve Wilkins: Do you try to talk the cop out of taking you to jail, or do you attack him?
Jorge: Do you try to talk the cop out of taking you to jail, or do you attack him?
Deputy Forte: Do you try to talk to the boys about drug safety? Or play the tough guy role, and not say anything?
Leader Joe: Do you shoot at the group? Or ask to take Henry and Johnny for some sexual favors?
Man: Do you shoot at the group on your own, or wait for Joe’s lead?
Dude: Do you shoot at the group on your own, or wait for Joe’s lead?
Henry: Do you fight the bikers? Or try to negotiate your way out of this?
Jessica: Do you fight the bikers? Or try to negotiate your way out of this?
Tara: Do you fight the bikers? Or try to negotiate your way out of this?
Johnny: Do you fight the bikers? Or try to negotiate your way out of this?
Vanessa: Do you fight the bikers? Or try to negotiate your way out of this?
Mandy: Do you fight the bikers? Or try to negotiate your way out of this?
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 8, 2014 19:50:10 GMT -5
Decisions are due by Tuesday night at 8:00pm, Central Time!
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Post by 'Foretold' Joker on Mar 9, 2014 16:54:39 GMT -5
Back from my holiday, looks like there could be some fun decisions to be made.
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 9, 2014 19:15:09 GMT -5
5 Decisions are in!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2014 2:41:58 GMT -5
Fun Fact: I actually went to school with a kid named Thomas Smalls my entire life, from Kindergarten through high school. He was such a weak little dude the entire time I knew him, and was even the team manager for girls' volleyball. So now it's fun for me to picture him as the high school jock QB.
Also, still hoping not to die....
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2014 13:15:15 GMT -5
I am not "taking one for the team"!!!
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 10, 2014 21:17:24 GMT -5
7 decisions are in. Still need the rest. Just like the last game, one (safety decision) is issued for those who do not turn it in on time. It is only a temporary decision to ensure that you don't die the one time you miss it.
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 11, 2014 18:57:03 GMT -5
Deadline extended to tomorrow night. Still need a few in.
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 11, 2014 22:45:57 GMT -5
Btw, I have two midterms coming this week. I have a film one Thursday Night and Western Civ midterm Friday morning. So don't expect an update on the story until the weekend!
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 13, 2014 12:35:59 GMT -5
Deadline has passed and will be adding decisions to the chart. I will crank out Part 3 after my midterms!
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Post by Brandon Walsh is Insane. on Mar 13, 2014 20:12:51 GMT -5
Good luck!
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 15, 2014 14:59:40 GMT -5
I dominated my last two midterms. I am driving home today and will do the next write up! Expect one late tonight or tomorrow!
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 16, 2014 20:39:29 GMT -5
Here is....Story 3: _______________________________________________________________________________
Texas Story-Part 3
Deputy Forte turns off the AC in his car. He rolls down the window and dips chewing tobacco into his mouth. In the back of the car, Thomas, Matt and Jorge sit in silence, looking down. Sitting in the front seat is Steve, who is staring into the stash of marijuana that Deputy Forte is holding on his lap.
Forte: (spits out the window) You kids are throwing your life away with this shit.
Thomas: How can you say that when you said you smoked a few jay’s yourself when you were younger?
Jorge: This could really affect my future. I could be a star.
Thomas: Oh, please.
Jorge: I am serious…this could really hurt my future. Please! Please take us back! I won’t do it anymore! I promise!
Jorge begins to cry. Fat Matt moves in to comfort Jorge by patting his head. Thomas rolls his eyes and distances himself from Jorge, while Steve keeps staring into the weed.
Deputy Forte: Woah, you can’t use my personal experiences as a way to excuse your poor decision making. I wasn’t a dumbshit when I was younger and I made sure I was never caught. This is all on you.
Jorge: BUT PLEASE!
Jorge begins to sob uncontrollably.
Fatt Matt: Shhh, shhh, it will be okay.
Thomas: Come on, man. I would like to play football for my school, K-State. I will even hook you up tickets against any Texas team that comes to our home.
Deputy Forte turns around to look directly at Thomas Smalls.
Deputy Forte: K-State?! I hate K-State! HOOK ‘EM HORNS!
Steve jumps out of his seat and double punches Deputy Forte straight in the face. Forte loses control of the car, and the car takes a sharp left off the road, driving straight down a hill. The car endures several rolls until landing upside down.
Thomas: Oh my god…where the hell are we? Jorge, Matt, Steve, are you guys okay?!
Jorge: I think I am fine.
Fat Matt: I…I don’t feel very good. My head hurts.
Thomas: Steve? Steve?!
Thomas looks over to see the dead bodies of Deputy Forte and Steve. Both of them went headfirst into the windshield, and flew around in their seats while the car took its tumble.
DEAD: Anonymous GM as Deputy Isaac Forte DEAD: Fake Jesus as Steve ‘The Doobiemaster’ Wilkins
Thomas: Help! Someone help!
Jorge: Thomas…look!
The three look out of Fat Matt’s window and see a stranger walking by in the distance…
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Dude: Hey Joe, how we gonna punish them? I think we shoot them all.
Leader Joe: No…no. We won’t shoot them. I say we draw a treaty. I let you guys be if you guys let us have the weed…and a little something extra.
Jessica: What do you want? We will do it! Just take it and we will leave!
Henry: Please, we don’t want any harm.
Leader Joe: Right…well, you guys can go right ahead…if I can borrow your two big hunks there for a bit.
Out of shock, Henry looks directly at Johnny and his jaw drops lower than a college student twerking at a night club.
Jessica: I don’t know about that…
Henry: Look…I don’t know what you mean by that…but I think there can be another way out of this.
Leader Joe cocks his gun and gives a nod towards Dude and Man. They straighten out their backs and cock their guns as well.
Leader Joe: There is no way out.
Henry turns over to Johnny, and brings in the girls.
Henry: We let them take us but we will fight back. And the girls can come and help out.
Tara: They have guns.
Mandy: Really big guns.
Vanessa: I don’t care about guns, we outnumber them.
Jessica: I like Henry’s plan. I doubt they will drive off.
Johnny: I swear to god, I would rather die than be raped.
Henry: It looks like that just might be the case. Be raped...or be dead.
The whole groups turns their attention to Joe. Henry and Johnny, slowly but surely, walk over to the bikers.
Henry: Fine, we will make that deal.
Leader Joe: Aha! Yes! Don’t worry…I brought the lube with me. It will be over before you know it. Hey dude, stay here and watch them. I will take these two boys down that hill. Hell Man, you can even come watch…make sure these two try to do nothing funny.
Leader Joe and Man take the two men down the hill. The others, Jessica, Tara, Mandy, and Vanessa, stand by the van. Dude stands back by his bike, holding his shotgun close to his stomach.
Jessica: I know we told Henry we would help him…but I just don’t think we can.
Tara: I don’t want to die. Let them get in the fun so they can leave. Better them than me.
Vanessa: Look, we told them we would help them! How are we gonna help them!?
From a distance, loud and high pitch shrieking can be heard from Henry.
Henry: AH! AH! Oh god! Oh god! Stop! Slow down!
The girls look at each other in shock.
Vanessa: You guys are awful. If it was us down there, you would be screaming for Johnny and Henry, begging for help.
Vanessa turns around and charges towards Dude, yelling at the top of her lungs. Dude steps back and opens fire.
Jessica: NO! VANESSA!
Vanessa falls to the ground, taking in a shotgun blast to the chest. The girls all scream, and Jessica charges over to the fallen Vanessa, holding up her head.
Dead: Namegoesnere123 as Vanessa Brinkley
Dude: Do any of you three wanna die next?!
From the bottom of the hill, Joe halts his anal carnage in Henry.
Leader Joe: What the hell was that?!
Man: I dunno!
Henry is on his hands and knees, crying. Johnny is standing next to Man, with tears running down his face.
Leader Joe: DUDE! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!
Story 3 has now ended. 3 have died. 11 remain. Lodi Rulz has used his one-time exception to the decisions.
Here are the following decisions: Jessica: Do you follow up with the attack on Dude, run down the hill to save the guys, or plead with Dude? Tara: Do you follow up with the attack on Dude, run down the hill to save the guys, or plead with Dude? Mandy: Do you follow up with the attack on Dude, run down the hill to save the guys, or plead with Dude? Dude: Do you respond to Leader Joe? Or do you shoot at the other girls? Man: Do you offer to check the girls for Joe? Or do you offer to watch the two men so Joe can check himself? Leader Joe: Do you finish what you started? Or look into the situation on top of the hill? Thomas: Do you yell at the stranger to let you out? Or do you stay quiet, and try to kick your way out? Fat Matt: Do you yell at the stranger to let you out? Or do you stay quiet, and try to kick your way out? Jorge: Do you yell at the stranger to let you out? Or do you stay quiet, and try to kick your way out? Henry: Do you continue to go along with Joe's activity, or do you fight back? Johnny: Do you stand by and let the situation play out, run up the hill to see what is the matter, or attack Joe?
Decisions are due Wednesday Night, 8pm Central time!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2014 0:31:09 GMT -5
Yay No Choices
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Post by MasonK565 on Mar 17, 2014 0:47:02 GMT -5
I literally spent 5 minutes looking over my post after I posted it because I knew something was wrong. I forgot Johnny and Henry's decisions. Updating post now! Thanks Cageking.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2014 1:41:42 GMT -5
.....Damn
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