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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2010 15:23:07 GMT -5
OK, updated the show with Sparks-Cage King added.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2010 15:30:46 GMT -5
Okay. Note to self Jerry Fish - Heatz Michael Muffer - Niteraw
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2010 16:03:35 GMT -5
Okay. Note to self Jerry Fish - Heatz Michael Muffer - Niteraw Don't worry. I wasn't even aware of this until last week.
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Post by Tyfo on Mar 8, 2010 17:46:36 GMT -5
Just letting you guys know, when this Saved By The Bell PPV was first thought up, I said I had planned to call out Mr. Belding. I still plan on doing so. He should just appear on the screen when you do and yell, WHAT IS GOING ON HERE!?!?!?!!!
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Post by smokinvokoun on Mar 8, 2010 18:27:14 GMT -5
Who knows...most of the heels will just magically turn face for no reason.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2010 19:24:09 GMT -5
For Saved by the Bell, I do have a few ideas. First off, anyone remember how back in the mid-90s, they had Radio WWF during the PPVs? Vince and Heenan would do the main show, while JR and Gorilla did the radio show. How about we have Zack Morris and Screech call the show for Radio Bayside? And like they did with WWF, for one match, Jesse and Gorilla do the radio broadcast and Zack and Screech call the main show. We need the Bayside cheerleaders at ringside for the whole show. And I would kill to see one of them get in a catfight with either Sara, Lexxie, or Jessica. Just sayin'.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Mar 8, 2010 20:18:49 GMT -5
Just letting you guys know, when this Saved By The Bell PPV was first thought up, I said I had planned to call out Mr. Belding. I still plan on doing so. Will BRB have to come to Mr. Belding's aid? Should be gold.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Mar 8, 2010 20:20:01 GMT -5
Okay. Note to self Jerry Fish - Heatz Michael Muffer - Niteraw Dammit, I sent my match in already with Fish as the announcer. Eh, I can edit that in a pinch.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Mar 8, 2010 20:26:04 GMT -5
What is the Face/Tweener/Heel quotient anyway?
Don't forget that I'm a face now.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2010 22:33:21 GMT -5
Could someone care to give me feedback on my matches?
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Mar 8, 2010 22:38:25 GMT -5
Uh... what's the last one that you wrote?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2010 22:52:28 GMT -5
Sparks v. Cageking.
Personally I think that the matches I write are too short. I'm going to have to cram and write some moderately long matches soon.
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Post by Jazzman on Mar 8, 2010 22:58:37 GMT -5
Sparks v. Cageking. Personally I think that the matches I write are too short. I'm going to have to cram and write some moderately long matches soon. Find matches you liked to read, re-read them and try to see where the match came from. I wish I could get back to writing as my matches told a hell of a story compared to the wiz-bang style of you guys. Both are awesome but sometimes a short simple match with a good story is just as enjoyable as a 3 page epic.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2010 23:35:44 GMT -5
Guys, I hate to do this, but NiteRaw is postponed until tomorrow afternoon. Everyone who was writing a match sent them in on time, this is a result of my own laziness, for which I apologize. I can promise I'll have it up when I get home tomorrow, just not sure when. Again, very sorry.
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Post by smokinvokoun on Mar 9, 2010 0:30:16 GMT -5
Its fine man. Get it in when you can.
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Post by Viva on Mar 9, 2010 2:00:16 GMT -5
The seldom seen and often feared triple post.
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Post by Johnny B. Decent on Mar 9, 2010 2:00:44 GMT -5
Is it OK for Evil M to get it done while he can?
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Mar 9, 2010 4:23:26 GMT -5
Sparks v. Cageking. Personally I think that the matches I write are too short. I'm going to have to cram and write some moderately long matches soon. Find matches you liked to read, re-read them and try to see where the match came from. I wish I could get back to writing as my matches told a hell of a story compared to the wiz-bang style of you guys. Both are awesome but sometimes a short simple match with a good story is just as enjoyable as a 3 page epic. Seconded. Here's a bunch of generally unorganized capsule writing tips of my own: - Spelling and grammar. Natch. - Write every match like it matters; if it reads like it doesn't matter, then no one will care and the match will probably be lame - Avoid "by the numbers" writing. - Use Finishers wisely and sparingly - the more important the match, the more likely that a finisher is appropriate - Write with the journey in mind as much as the destination - Don't telegraph the victory, let both sides get their licks in - Know your match's place on the card. I prefer not to go hog wild unless my match is one of the three last matches or at least a clear "marquee" match - PPV Matches > Niteraw Matches > Heatz Matches - Longer /= Good, Shorter /= Bad - Don't bury contestants; that being said, Jesse King typically should say things to bury the wrestler that he dislikes but Gorilla Tim Hoss serves as his foil, espousing the merits of both contestants. - I like to treat the commentary as the "spine" of a match as it is useful for highlighting the psychology of the match, reminding the reader why the match is taking place, and for selling the merits of all contestants - I've often found that writing transitions between moves increases tension and interest to a match. Furthermore, describing the application of a move is more interesting than just saying what move is being used. I could piledrive you, or I could kick you in the midsection to bend you over, waistlock you, pull you upside down, and drop down to the mat, driving your head and neck into it. - Every attack should have a consequence, and a character who is wise enough goes for the body locations that benefit their finisher - I prefer to write my matches ASAP to both get them out of the way and so that they are not late and succumb to "last minute syndrome." Write alternate endings to easily accommodate match results. - Character Bio pages are your friend - Always be informed about the match that you're writing or else you might make a mistake that makes the match seem stupid. - As many will say, experience is the best teacher and skill comes with time. For a capsule example of everything I've said, I think that the Four Corners match from Ernest Goes to Wargames is my best written match yet if I do say so myself, although I do still rather admire the Fatal Four-Way for the Hardcore Championship that I won last year. I guess that I just like writing Fatal Four-Ways, even if they are more difficult to make interesting.
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Post by Jonathan Michaels on Mar 9, 2010 4:25:49 GMT -5
Eventually everyone's gonna be heel but me.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Mar 9, 2010 4:47:13 GMT -5
Once again, what is the division of faces, heels, and tweeners right now anyway? Lemme think... there's Jonathan Michaels, Littlenaitch, Tyfo, "Champagne" Jay Carroll, The Sam, and Me. In other words, The Family. Enigma disappeared. (what if his computer crashed and he just plain cannot access the 'net?) Starshine was going for a face turn but then he left. Where's M.O.P. been lately?
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