What is the meaning behind this?

[i.Sarita.com]

"Alone she sits, separated by an endless boundary
So much like others, yet still peerless in her beauty
Akin to many, but a beacon all her own
Drawn to her radiance, like moth to a flame
Her brilliance brings us from afar, enchanted by her fire

We are the same, yet are incomparable
At first glance, we all burn with passion
Some more than others, but none the altered
Striving to close the distance, needing to be near
To feel her luster, among this ceaseless cold

One stands out, at variance with others
It sees beyond the allure, deeper past the shimmer
It senses the inmost of her presence , the warmth of the heart
The truest flicker, as profound as she is exquisite
It brings to him something more, something others cannot feel

Vitality, purpose, vigor, sparkle and soul
Still so similar to the others, yet separated by warmth
Together they create essence, and opportunity
She brings him life, dependant on her glow
He brings her love, dependant only on her own"

Well, what do you think?

[Strotha]

It's beautiful.

[i.Sarita.com]

May 26, 2009 4:12:46 GMT -5 Strotha said:

It's beautiful.

Thanks. I wrote it earlier tonight. And am interested in seeing how people interpret the meaning behind it.

[Strotha]

May 26, 2009 4:15:59 GMT -5 i.Sarita.com said:

May 26, 2009 4:12:46 GMT -5 Strotha said:

It's beautiful.

Thanks. I wrote it earlier tonight. And am interested in seeing how people interpret the meaning behind it.

You're welcome. I like to write too. I love seeing the work of others.

I find it kind of touching because it reminds me of my relationship with my girlfriend and what she means to me, especially these lines:

She brings him life, dependant on her glow
He brings her love, dependant only on her own

I kind of read it with her in mind. Based on that, I'd say it's about being deeply in love with someone.

[Tarik Dee]

The consumation of the true love, that´s what it means for me, very beautiful.

[i.Sarita.com]

May 26, 2009 16:22:54 GMT -5 Tarik Dee said:

The consumation of the true love, that´s what it means for me, very beautiful.

Thanks for the insight, and the compliment. I will say, of everyone I've shown it to, nobody has said the meaning as though from my point of view. Which is actually great I think, its nice to know that I can create something that means very different things to people, yet still familiar in key points. And though I'd like for people to know the simple meaning of it, the meaning I went with, I'll wait and see if anyone can "figure it out" But like I said, I'm glad people can find something to take from it that is special to them.

[Rube]

You wanna nail this chick.

[i.Sarita.com]

May 27, 2009 4:01:13 GMT -5 Rube said:

You wanna nail this chick.

Far from it.

[Janitor From Mars]

If we don't already have a thread somewhere where Crappers share their writing, we need to start one.

I'd post my own but I don't want to steal the spotlight from the original poster.

[i.Sarita.com]

May 27, 2009 4:05:49 GMT -5 Janitor From Mars said:

If we don't already have a thread somewhere where Crappers share their writing, we need to start one.

I'd post my own but I don't want to steal the spotlight from the original poster.

Well I think we did have a thread like that at one time, if you want, you can go ahead and start a new one and post your work in there. I'd love to read it, and I know of a couple of others who would also.