Post by Gillberg: 0-175 on Sept 11, 2006 18:55:00 GMT -5
Don't get me wrong. I bought both your books (Although I only bought WrestleCrap because you always seem to repost the same 20 classic crap articles. Period.), and I did have a good time reading them. I don't usually read, but I spent one rainy August day reading The Death from cover to cover nonstop. Yes, it is a good book. However, I think it could have been a lot better than it is. Instead of writing a wall of text, Mr. Numbers will come out and play a role in my list.
1) Jumping Around
Now I think I get you two. RD I *think* isn't a writer by profession. But Bryan? For someone who takes pride in writing FF Weekly, he should learn some rules of chronology. I can't describe any of my gripes down to the page number, because I can't be arsed to do so, but one chapter strikes me in particular. After Eddie Guerrero got into a car accident, the book detailed it, and how he got in the ring too early. I got that. But about 20 pages (and maybe even a chapter later) we return to that incident, acting as if it JUST happened in that point in time. I didn't know where I was in that point in time. 97, 98, whatever. All I had to tell the time to me was the chapter header and the main event card of the PPV that month.
This issue isn't so big, but get's kind of annoying.
2) The Bias
I know WCW was bad. I watched it during it's demise until I couldn't take it anymore. But still, the bias towards the company is horrific in this book. Yeah, signing The Worm was a bad decision internally, but instead of bashing it for page after page, why not elaborate more on the exposure and good it did the company. Not only that, but the book is riddled with comments like "they were too busy trying to fight WWF that they missed a chance to print money on PPV". After the 3rd time I read that comment, I got it. I didn't need to be reminded how bad decisions there were. I got it the first time. Every nook and cranny of the company has been turned against them. Yeah, they did wrong, but they also did good. I would have liked to have read this as more of a factual report rather than the facts fueled by opinion. It's not called "The Opinionated Death of WCW". The words "One could say" should have been added in that book hundredfold, at least.
3) Lack of the undercard
I was really hoping to dig into the skin of the storylines of WCW. Perhaps I was hoping for more of a summary of the company rather than the internal decisions that killed the company. The fact that the undercard gets buried by the top is often mentioned, but the undercard fueds are never really highlighted in the book. Nothing about the Flock, Jericho v. Malenko, etc. Most people remember the nWo, but to learn about the undercard would have interested me to no end, and to see how the politics played into their storylines.
4) Ending laziness
Towards the end of the book, I think RD and Bryan got lazy. It seems like it. Little is told about the storylines of the dying days of WCW, which interested me the most as I don't remember them. That suprises me because the birth of WCW is detailed very nicely in the beginning of the book, but the 2000-2001 chapters do very little other than bash Russo and say how Bischoff couldn't do anything with the company. Where was the bad decisions like the Natural Born Thrillers? Or good ones like the Magnificant Seven? Why not highlight how WCW was getting back on track instead of simply stating it, which I felt happened.
Other than those few things, I loved the book, and it's the first book since WrestleCrap that I've bothered to read on my own (not for uni). Good work, but an author needs to be criticized. Luckily, with the help of Slash Wrestling, The Death, and the Monday Night Wars, I think I got enough information that I seeked out to find.
1) Jumping Around
Now I think I get you two. RD I *think* isn't a writer by profession. But Bryan? For someone who takes pride in writing FF Weekly, he should learn some rules of chronology. I can't describe any of my gripes down to the page number, because I can't be arsed to do so, but one chapter strikes me in particular. After Eddie Guerrero got into a car accident, the book detailed it, and how he got in the ring too early. I got that. But about 20 pages (and maybe even a chapter later) we return to that incident, acting as if it JUST happened in that point in time. I didn't know where I was in that point in time. 97, 98, whatever. All I had to tell the time to me was the chapter header and the main event card of the PPV that month.
This issue isn't so big, but get's kind of annoying.
2) The Bias
I know WCW was bad. I watched it during it's demise until I couldn't take it anymore. But still, the bias towards the company is horrific in this book. Yeah, signing The Worm was a bad decision internally, but instead of bashing it for page after page, why not elaborate more on the exposure and good it did the company. Not only that, but the book is riddled with comments like "they were too busy trying to fight WWF that they missed a chance to print money on PPV". After the 3rd time I read that comment, I got it. I didn't need to be reminded how bad decisions there were. I got it the first time. Every nook and cranny of the company has been turned against them. Yeah, they did wrong, but they also did good. I would have liked to have read this as more of a factual report rather than the facts fueled by opinion. It's not called "The Opinionated Death of WCW". The words "One could say" should have been added in that book hundredfold, at least.
3) Lack of the undercard
I was really hoping to dig into the skin of the storylines of WCW. Perhaps I was hoping for more of a summary of the company rather than the internal decisions that killed the company. The fact that the undercard gets buried by the top is often mentioned, but the undercard fueds are never really highlighted in the book. Nothing about the Flock, Jericho v. Malenko, etc. Most people remember the nWo, but to learn about the undercard would have interested me to no end, and to see how the politics played into their storylines.
4) Ending laziness
Towards the end of the book, I think RD and Bryan got lazy. It seems like it. Little is told about the storylines of the dying days of WCW, which interested me the most as I don't remember them. That suprises me because the birth of WCW is detailed very nicely in the beginning of the book, but the 2000-2001 chapters do very little other than bash Russo and say how Bischoff couldn't do anything with the company. Where was the bad decisions like the Natural Born Thrillers? Or good ones like the Magnificant Seven? Why not highlight how WCW was getting back on track instead of simply stating it, which I felt happened.
Other than those few things, I loved the book, and it's the first book since WrestleCrap that I've bothered to read on my own (not for uni). Good work, but an author needs to be criticized. Luckily, with the help of Slash Wrestling, The Death, and the Monday Night Wars, I think I got enough information that I seeked out to find.