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Post by héad.casé on May 11, 2011 9:24:40 GMT -5
My trainer/booker asked me to come up with a bio for my character to put up on the website, so I came up with this. Is it decent enough?
Name: Headcase
Height: 5'1
Weight: 11 and a half stone
Wrestling Debut: 2009
Promotions: TAW, ACW, TWA
Finisher: Anesthesia (Crossface Chicken Wing), Frayed Ends of Sanity (Kravat Neckbreaker), Blackened (Hammerlock Leg Sweep), Running Senton Bomb
Title History: None
Not a lot is known about this masked mad man or where he was even found. Some say he's an escaped mental patient from the Three Counties Asylum, where rumour has it he was given so much shock treatment, he has lost his ability to speak properly, and all he can offer is a grunt or scream.
No-one knows why this man was driven insane, but they say all it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest man alive to lunacy. It's even harder to pinpoint his reasons for coming to TAW. Is he here to win championships? To maim and torture? Since joining Dr. Loco and Insane Hussein in the 'Asylum', Headcase seems to have found his 'family' and embraced his insanity, and with a mind that's as easy to manipulate as his, that makes him even more dangerous.
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Post by Jacob Lee on May 12, 2011 1:07:21 GMT -5
Yeah, looks good. Wish you luck with everything. The only thing I'd do differently is list height and weight as unknown to add a level of mystique.
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Post by James McCloud IS John Godot on May 12, 2011 1:14:23 GMT -5
Yeah, looks good. Wish you luck with everything. The only thing I'd do differently is list height and weight as unknown to add a level of mystique. I agree with this. Hey, if you need an excuse, just write that no-one's willing to get close enough to you to measure you. ;D That's dependent on your trainer/booker and if he really wants the stats to be posted though. The bio part itself is cool. I like it. Heck, it's only a few lines and I'm kind of intrigued myself. Good luck! |
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Post by Hammer Smashed Ball on May 12, 2011 1:41:35 GMT -5
Is there anywhere we can watch any of your stuff?
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Post by noleafclover1980 on May 12, 2011 3:49:36 GMT -5
I just wanna say, I love the Metallica theme w/ your move names. With your character bio, I'm gonna take a stab and guess that you're using Sanitarium as an entrance theme?
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Post by héad.casé on May 12, 2011 5:01:28 GMT -5
Haha, I definetely wanted to use Sanitarium as my theme song, but it takes too long to really kick in. I'm currently using "Some Kind of Monster" since that kinda fits too, but I have been going back and forth on whether to change it to Sanitarium. Unfortunately none of my matches are uploaded anywhere. Which is...kinda sad  . A friend did record some footage of me at the last show I did though, i'm still waiting for him to put it up so I can see it, lol. |
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2011 11:35:17 GMT -5
Not bad. I'd reword a few things to make it flow better, but I get a good sense of what your character is from reading it.
"Not a lot is known about this masked madman. Some say he's an escaped mental patient from the Three Counties Asylum, where (intense/brutal/other adjective) shock treatment robbed him of his ability to speak, able only to offer a grunt or a scream.
No one knows what drove this man insane, but all it takes is one bad day to reduce the sanest of men to lunacy. The bigger mystery is his reason for coming to TAW. Is it to win championships, or to maim and torture his opponents? Since joining Dr. Loco and Insane Hussein in the 'Asylum, Headcase has found a 'family' and embraced his insanity. With a mind that is as easy to manipulate as his, that acceptance makes him even more dangerous."
Something like that. I like the backstory you've come up with and I too enjoy the Metallica themed moves. Can't go wrong with the Crossface Chicken Wing either.
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Post by noleafclover1980 on May 12, 2011 15:35:07 GMT -5
Haha, I definetely wanted to use Sanitarium as my theme song, but it takes too long to really kick in. I'm currently using "Some Kind of Monster" since that kinda fits too, but I have been going back and forth on whether to change it to Sanitarium. Unfortunately none of my matches are uploaded anywhere. Which is...kinda sad . A friend did record some footage of me at the last show I did though, i'm still waiting for him to put it up so I can see it, lol. Sanitarium could work for like a slow, brooding entrance with it's pace.. or hell, even The Thing That Should Not Be would be cool. |
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Post by Schemer on May 13, 2011 12:22:15 GMT -5
The height and weight should be something like "Unknown because no one would dare to measure/weigh him"
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Post by FailedGimmick on May 13, 2011 13:28:40 GMT -5
What exactly is a half stone?
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Post by jrcz on May 13, 2011 13:36:35 GMT -5
What exactly is a half stone?  |
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Post by héad.casé on May 15, 2011 19:24:59 GMT -5
Haha just as I say none of my stuff has been put online, my match from this past Friday night just did! Looked like it went well. Wasn't perfect but i'm pleased. Notice how I got the biggest pop when I came into the match  . I also didn't have a say in the 'Asylum' stable music either unfortunately . |
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Post by ratedXsuperstar on May 15, 2011 19:30:51 GMT -5
Please tell me you base your motions/mannerisms/vocalization on the original Leatherface.
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Post by froggyfrog on May 15, 2011 20:48:33 GMT -5
Are you really only 5'1?
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Yes this is me...
. A friend did record some footage of me at the last show I did though, i'm still waiting for him to put it up so I can see it, lol.
. I also didn't have a say in the 'Asylum' stable music either unfortunately 
