Post by King Ghidorah on Mar 13, 2012 13:30:46 GMT -5
This was posted by the 12 year old sister of a forum I frequent, and I had to post it, basically she's writing a pokemon fanfiction, and her brother is the proof reader. Good stuff, I'll post chapters as she releases them:
Chapter One: Mission X
Ash Ketchum was traveling around Kanto with his friends Misty and Brock. ASh had black hair with longer and he wore a hat that was red and white with a green check mark. Brock was a... No one knew what Brock and his family was. Rumor has it he and his family are the last surviving ancestors of the Cave People of Kanto. Misty is a really pretty girl with cute orange hair. She is skinny and has a crush on Ash. Ash wanted to become a Pokemon Master, but he just realized he needed to figure out something else: WHO HIS FATHER IS!!
Ash is 10 years old and has never met his father. He often cries himself to sleep with Misty and Pikachu because he doesn't know this fact. One day he decided he was going to do something about this.
"Misty, Brock, come here and listen to me. I am going to do something about my dad. I am going to find out who he is!" Ash shouted. Misty and Brock nodded their heads, they would help him.
"We'll call this mission, Mission X!"
"YAY!" said Misty, Brock and Pikachu. Ash had a suspicion that his dad may be living in Lavender Town. He had heard of some mysterious killings taking place in Lavender Town? Was his dad a murderer? He didn't know, but there was only one way to find out!
Chapter 2: Pidgeot Comes Home
"If only we had a way to get to Lavender Town." Ash said. Then he remembered! He had released Pidgeot into the wild.
"Brock, quick. Make a bird call!" Ash exclaimed. Brock was an excellent bird caller. Ash believed it was one of the traits of the old native people.
"Ssswwissghsssgwhhgggg!" Brock called out. Time stood still. Tick tock. A Weedle inched by Misty, who screamed.
"AWAWWUUGHAUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAGHABGAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABUG! HELP MEEEEEEE!" She cried. Ash tried to step in to save his girl, but then something swooped out of the sky and ripped the Weedle's face off and flung it to the ground.
"PIDGEOT!!!" Ash, and Brock shouted! Misty was still traumatized so she was unable to cheer for Pidgeot.
Pidgeot swooped down beside ash. Ash pet him. Ash loved all of his Pokemon.
"Pidgeot, can you take us to Lavender Town?" Ash asked.
"Qqqquouquouuuiuoh" Pidgeot said. He wasn't big enough to carry all of them. They would need to think of a new plan. Off in the distance, a Meowth Balloon was watching over the troubled teens.
Chapter 3: Brock's Special Gift
"There has to be another way" Ash said. They all thought for a long while. Pidgeot hung his head in shame, he felt sad he couldn't fly them all to Lavender Town.
"I got it!" Brock exclaimed. Misty Ash, and Pikachu listened to Brock make his odd bird call.
""Ssswwissghsssgwhhgggg!" he sang out. They waited for the birds to come, and come they did. Spearows, Pidgeys, and Doduos all came flying and running towards them. There were at least twenty. Brock mounted a Doduo, Ash climbed on Pidgeots back, and Misty also got on a Pidgeot. Pikachu also rode on a Pidgey.
"Brock, why are you not flying with us? It would be much faster?" Misty asked. Brock shook his head.
"I feel a strange connection with this Doduo. I think it is my destiny to ride him. He came to me and I choose him. He will get me to Lavender Town." Brock said calmly.
Ash shrugged his shoulders.
"Ok Brock, We'll see you in Lavender Town!" Ash and Misty and Pikachu said. With that, they took off high in the sky. Brock waved good bye to his friend. He didn't know how long it would take for his Doduo to get him to Lavender Town. He knew they were fast, but he didn't know how many miles per hour. He patted Doduo on the head.
"Doduo, are you ready? We have a special connection and we are going to ride to Lavender Town together!" Brock told the Doduo.
"Qqqquouquouuuiuoh" Doduo replied, nodding his head.
"YAHHH!" Brock shouted, and with that they were all on the way to Lavender Town
Ash Ketchum was traveling around Kanto with his friends Misty and Brock. ASh had black hair with longer and he wore a hat that was red and white with a green check mark. Brock was a... No one knew what Brock and his family was. Rumor has it he and his family are the last surviving ancestors of the Cave People of Kanto. Misty is a really pretty girl with cute orange hair. She is skinny and has a crush on Ash. Ash wanted to become a Pokemon Master, but he just realized he needed to figure out something else: WHO HIS FATHER IS!!
Ash is 10 years old and has never met his father. He often cries himself to sleep with Misty and Pikachu because he doesn't know this fact. One day he decided he was going to do something about this.
"Misty, Brock, come here and listen to me. I am going to do something about my dad. I am going to find out who he is!" Ash shouted. Misty and Brock nodded their heads, they would help him.
"We'll call this mission, Mission X!"
"YAY!" said Misty, Brock and Pikachu. Ash had a suspicion that his dad may be living in Lavender Town. He had heard of some mysterious killings taking place in Lavender Town? Was his dad a murderer? He didn't know, but there was only one way to find out!
Chapter 2: Pidgeot Comes Home
"If only we had a way to get to Lavender Town." Ash said. Then he remembered! He had released Pidgeot into the wild.
"Brock, quick. Make a bird call!" Ash exclaimed. Brock was an excellent bird caller. Ash believed it was one of the traits of the old native people.
"Ssswwissghsssgwhhgggg!" Brock called out. Time stood still. Tick tock. A Weedle inched by Misty, who screamed.
"AWAWWUUGHAUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAGHABGAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ABUG! HELP MEEEEEEE!" She cried. Ash tried to step in to save his girl, but then something swooped out of the sky and ripped the Weedle's face off and flung it to the ground.
"PIDGEOT!!!" Ash, and Brock shouted! Misty was still traumatized so she was unable to cheer for Pidgeot.
Pidgeot swooped down beside ash. Ash pet him. Ash loved all of his Pokemon.
"Pidgeot, can you take us to Lavender Town?" Ash asked.
"Qqqquouquouuuiuoh" Pidgeot said. He wasn't big enough to carry all of them. They would need to think of a new plan. Off in the distance, a Meowth Balloon was watching over the troubled teens.
Chapter 3: Brock's Special Gift
"There has to be another way" Ash said. They all thought for a long while. Pidgeot hung his head in shame, he felt sad he couldn't fly them all to Lavender Town.
"I got it!" Brock exclaimed. Misty Ash, and Pikachu listened to Brock make his odd bird call.
""Ssswwissghsssgwhhgggg!" he sang out. They waited for the birds to come, and come they did. Spearows, Pidgeys, and Doduos all came flying and running towards them. There were at least twenty. Brock mounted a Doduo, Ash climbed on Pidgeots back, and Misty also got on a Pidgeot. Pikachu also rode on a Pidgey.
"Brock, why are you not flying with us? It would be much faster?" Misty asked. Brock shook his head.
"I feel a strange connection with this Doduo. I think it is my destiny to ride him. He came to me and I choose him. He will get me to Lavender Town." Brock said calmly.
Ash shrugged his shoulders.
"Ok Brock, We'll see you in Lavender Town!" Ash and Misty and Pikachu said. With that, they took off high in the sky. Brock waved good bye to his friend. He didn't know how long it would take for his Doduo to get him to Lavender Town. He knew they were fast, but he didn't know how many miles per hour. He patted Doduo on the head.
"Doduo, are you ready? We have a special connection and we are going to ride to Lavender Town together!" Brock told the Doduo.
"Qqqquouquouuuiuoh" Doduo replied, nodding his head.
"YAHHH!" Brock shouted, and with that they were all on the way to Lavender Town