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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 9, 2013 17:07:46 GMT -5
NITERAW *The NiteRaw theme plays as rookie Richard Johnson enters the ring as he is ready to go.* MM: Ladies & Gentlemen, from Tinton Falls, New Jersey, weighing in at 368 pounds... Richard Hertz!TH: Well, here comes a kid who is very promising and he is here tonight to make his FAWA debut. Former All-American from Rutgers University and his soon to be wife is backstage to see the action.JK: So does his you know what…..hurt?TH: Jesus Christ, Jesse….did you really have to go there?JK: Hey, it was low hanging fruit. I just couldn’t resist grabbing it.TH: Well, he has told me personally that he has heard that joke before and he has stretched the last person. Why don’t I tell him you asked?JK: Whoa, Hoss. You know I was only joking. Besides, he has bigger things to worry about.TH: That is true, he has a tough opponent tonight for his debut.TH: And here comes his opponent.*Seth Drakin comes out with some sunglasses and a towel. MM: And his opponent, from an unknown location, weighing 265 pounds, Seth Drakin!!!JK: I wonder what that towel is for.TH: Well, a towel can be used to wipe away sweat, but in ring psychology, it can be thrown in the ring to end a match if the opponent is so beaten up.JK: Tim, I know that. I was merely saying that Seth normally doesn't come out with a towel. TH: That is true.*Seth enters the ring and looks at Richard with a scowl on his face. Seth puts the towel on the side near the entrance ramp. Seth takes his jacket off and then his sunglasses off, but his eyes are closed. He then opens them and his red pupils are larger than usual.* JK: What the hell happened to Seth’s eyes?*Seth then comes up to Richard and spits red mist on him.* TH: What the hell is Seth doing?JK: Blinding the eyes. It’s all legal with Chaos Reigns rules. *Seth starts stomping on Richard with his feet as the bell rings.* TH: This is unfair! Seth didn’t even give this youngster time to prepare. JK: Chaos Reigns, Hoss.*Seth starts yelling at Richard as the ref tries to get Seth to back off. Seth doesn’t listen and as soon as Richard gets up, still blinded by the mist, Seth locks a dragon sleeper on him.* TH: Seth surprisingly going for a submission here.JK: Um...Tim, that’s not a submission he is going for.*Seth then drops Richard down into a Back Cracker, but still has the hold locked in.* TH: Oh my god! Please tell me he is not doing what I think he is doing.*Seth lifts Richard up while still doing a dragon sleeper. Drakin then yells and gives Hertz another Back Cracker, and is still holding on.* JK: He is, Tim. He is giving us the Ultra Violence.TH: Dear god, I have only heard that Seth does this. Seeing it in person is worse.*Seth still has the dragon sleeper locked in and picks Richard for a third time before dropping him again. The ref just yells for the bell the ring as it does. The ref then goes to the time keeper and yells that this match is over as Muffer speaks.* MM: The referee has ended this match and has awarded the match to Seth Drakin.*The crowd boos as Seth lets go and looks at the ref who gets back in the ring and raises his hand. Seth then decks the ref. He picks up the official and gives him a Tail’s End.* TH: What the hell is this?! Seth just won the damn match and he takes out the official. TH: And there isn’t a damn thing anyone can do about it. TH: I know, but……….what the hell is Seth doing now?*Seth goes over to Richard and lifts him up while smiling. He lifts Hertz’s arm and has it wave while Seth looks into the camera.* DRAKIN: Hi, Jonathan…*Seth then puts him in another Dragon Sleeper and continues with his Ultra Violence of dropping his back on his knees.* TH: This is ridiculous! Someone stop this!!!*Seth still has the Dragon Sleeper locked in and is looking to the ramp. Suddenly, MiscreAnt is on the ramp with a woman, who is in tears.* TH: Oh my god, that is Amanda Jackson, Richard’s fiancée.JK: I think I know what is going on?TH: What?JK: You'll see...*Seth smiles as he sees the two and MiscreAnt has a mic.* MISCREANT: Hello ladies and gentleman, boys and girls. I am glad you are all enjoying the show. Now dear Amanda. You see Seth in the ring. He is just about to hit some more Ultra Violance. Now I have seen many a man get hit with this move over and over again and never wrestle again. Ever. He is not afraid to take out the referee or anything to get what he wants. Now all you have to do Amanda, is throw the towel into the ring. Do you really want to risk you fiancee never wrestling again, or possibly even circumstances can be arranged?*Seth is laughing as he teases doing it again, but stops. Amanda runs down the ring in tears, grabs the towel, and throws it in the ring. Seth then drops Richard as his fiancée enters the ring. She is cradling her beau as Seth laughs. He looks into the camera, shows this moment, and speaks.* DRAKIN: Jonathan.........this is all for you.*Seth leaves the ring to a chorus of boos for what he has done.* TH: So let me get this straight, this whole atrocity was just to show Jonathan. This is sick and repulsive!JK: Seth Drakin hates Jonathan Michaels more than any of us will know. Hell in a Cell at Gookermania VI will be a classic.TH: Gookermania VI can wait. Someone will have to get out here and take care of Richard. Folks, we're gonna have to take a commercial break and hopefully we will take care of this travesty.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 9, 2013 17:07:58 GMT -5
NITERAWTELEVISION CHAMPIONSHIPSCOTT MARTIN VERSUS TMK TH: Welcome back to Niteraw, ladies and gentlemen. Up next Mister Battle Bowl himself, Tobias Madoc Kingsley – TMK they say – will defend his Television Championship against Scott Martin, one half of the Dream Tream. JK: Both men now have a lot of pressure on their minds as Gookermania approaches. But who will take better advantage of that? TH: To that I say Muffer, take it away! MM: Ladies and gentlemen of the FAWA Galaxy, the following match is scheduled for one fall and is for the Television Championship. MM: Introducing first: the challenger. From Beverly, Massachusetts, weighing 215lbs, he is one half of the FAWA Tag Team Champions: Scott… Martin! *Scott Martin climbs a turnbuckle and holds his Tag Team Championship belt in the air.* MARTIN: Say my name! *Martin back flips off the turnbuckle and faces the Awesometron.* MM: And his opponent. From Block H of the Parts Unknown Asylum for the Criminally Insane, weighing 250lbs, he is the FAWA Television Champion: Tobias. Madoc. Kingsley! DING! DING! DING! TH: They’re feeling each other out now. *The two men approach each other cautiously, circling for a moment before locking up, it doesn't last long however as Martin quickly goes low and behind, looking for an ankle lock, TMK rolls out quickly and they get back to their feet.* TH: Kingsley showing some finesse. JK: But Martin’s back on the attack-TH: A Judo throw from Kingsley. He goes for the pin!
One!JK: Easy kickout Scott Martin. Gonna take more than that. *Martin attempts to sit up but is quickly pushed back down. TMK gets halfway to his feet, then drops down and-* TH: Oof. A forearm to the challenger’s face. JK: He’s putting every pound into that, TH. Martin looks rattled.TH: And he don’t look done yet. *Tobias begins raining forearm after forearm in a brutal display, breaking Scott Martin's goggles in the process, resulting in some bleeding from the bridge of the nose and just above his left eye.* TH: He’s ruthlessly attacking his opponent. JK: The Reign of Chaos favors the brutal. If Martin doesn’t pick it up, TMK’s gonna eat him for breakfast. *Kingsley lets out a maniacal laugh as he runs his fingers over the open wound, licking them afterwards.* TH: The Television Champ is a sick man. *He stands and runs into the ropes, coming back and going for a running senton, but Martin shifts out of harm’s way at the last moment, grabbing TMK's legs and going for-* TH: Martin with the Border Stretch! JK: Not so fast, Gorilla. TH: He’s back to his feet. JK: Martin’s faster than him though-TH: Clothesline from Hell! Martin hooks the leg! ONE!
TWO! TH: No! Martin was close. JK: A close call on the champ there. *Martin removes what's left of his goggles, tossing them out of the ring and wiping some blood from his eyes. He grabs TMK by the hair and brings him to his feet, giving him a stiff right hand to the jaw, followed by a left in the same vein.* JK: Martin is picking up the pace tonight. He’s giving as good as he’s getting now. *Martin steps back and swings his right leg.* TH: Martin with a roundhouse kick-JK: Wait a minute. Wait a minute. *Martin’s leg is caught, and TMK delivers a hard elbow to Scott Martin's knee before dropping him to the ground.* TMK: YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! GET HIM A BODY BAG!*Martin slams his fist on the mat in frustration as he clutches at his knee with his free hand. TMK paces around Martin.* TH: Look at that sick smile on the champion’s face. He’s relishing torturing the Tag Team Champion. JK: If Martin’s not careful, this match could cost him and his teammates the match against the Cult of the End at Gookermania, and his belt. * Scott tries to get to his feet.* TMK: Ooh, you're determined aren't you? *TMK gives Martin a stiff slap in the face. Martin takesTMK to the ground unexpectedly and rains punches as fast as his arms can travel.* JK: Martin’s going postal on the champ! TH: Is this what Dupoe’s dark gods want? *Tobias covers up as best as he can from the furious attack, but catches one right on the chin. With TMK dazed, Martin stands, riding the adrenaline rush as well as he knows how he runs into the ropes and comes back, dropping an elbow onto TMK. He stands and drops another, and another, and another and yet another!* TH: A storm of elbows and the challenger ain’t finished! *He stops for a moment to drag TMK to the corner, climbing to the second rope and-* TH: One last elbow and he goes for the cover!
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TMK with the kick out! What’s he supposed to do? *Martin looks up at the referee, holding up three fingers as blood continues to trickle down his face. He looks down at TMK and then up to the turnbuckle, shaking his head and standing, climbing up to the top rope facing away from TMK.* JK: When you wrestle a tough son of a bitch you gotta expect to work harder than normal to put him away. *When Martin turns to check if Kingsley is still in position, he's shoved forward, getting crotched on the top rope.* JK: Martin can say good bye to a happy weekend there. *Tobias climbs up with Martin and begins nailing him with clubbing forearms to the back of the head.* TH: The champ fighting back with as much vigor as ever. * Through this onslaught Martin positions his feet on the second rope, getting stable footing. He thrashes his head back, catching TMK on the bridge of the nose. TMK leans back in a daze…* TH: Kingsley’s gonna fall. JK: Not if Martin has anything to do with it. *Martin grabs TMK by the head, setting up for what looks like a Name Maker from the top out onto the floor. He stands up, about to go for it, but there's nothing he can do to stop TMK from trapping his arm and going back, dropping Martin from the top with a modified Kingsley Plex! They hit the mat with a sickening sound.* JK: I think the nosebleeds heard that one. TH: They both look out of it, but Kingsley with the pin! *TMK tosses his arm over the near-unconscious Scott Martin* ONE!
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THREE! DING! DING! DING! MM: Ladies and gentlemen here is your winner and STILL FAWA TELEVISION CHAMPION... Tobias... Madoc... KINGSLEY! *The referee hands TMK the Championship as he stands. He holds up the title triumphantly, looking over at Martin. He smiles and exits the ring, walking up the ramp.* TH: What a brutal brawl we just saw tonight. JK: I hope the World Heavyweight Champion, Connor Mackenzie, saw that tonight. Because come Gookermania, it’ll be his turn to be Kingsley’s punching bag. TH: He’s overcome some hellish odds before, but could this man slay the Digital Dragon? Find out at Gookermania VI! NITERAW CREDITS Antihero Boiler Room Brawler Jeremy Dupoe The Man The Call Asher MiscreAnt Seth Drakin Spiked Mohican Waffel113
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 9, 2013 17:23:39 GMT -5
Now, if we do this "Gookermania Part 1" idea, here's what I was thinking would be the marquee matches based on this week's promos: TELEVISION TITLE MATCH MICHAEL HAYDEN VERSUS TMK
TEXAS DEATH MATCH ANTIHERO VERSUS MISCREANT
TORNADO ELIMINATION TAG MATCH FOR THE TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIP DREAM TEAM MCLAREN (DAVID MCLAREN, SCOTT MARTIN, THE DREAM, BOIRAA RUUMU BUROURAA) VERSUS THE CULT OF THE END (JEREMY DUPOE, DISTURBANCE!BRB, JACK CAIN, MARIO NETT)
Now some might say, "Wait, wait. We haven't gotten to do our "go home show" promo yet." Exactly. Do them in this upcoming show and then next week, Gookermania Part 2, you have your match. It really is as simple as that. As for the rest of you, you can still send in promos, skits, vignettes, videos, etc. You can try to build up to a match for Gookermania Part 2 if you can manage. Really take advantage of this. Right now, I can see Gookermania Part 2 being the following: FAN FORUMS CHAMPIONSHIP ANTIHERO VERSUS WILLIAM ANDERSON
HELL IN A CELL JONATHAN MICHAELS VERSUS SETH DRAKIN
WORLD HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPIONSHIP TMK VERSUS CONNOR MACKENZIE
Ya see what I just did there? I double booked TMK and Antihero, but they're on two separate shows. Two. Separate. Shows. Double booked! Not on one show! Two shows! Both matches make sense to happen, but they don't have to happen on one night. And next week, Gookermania Part 1, has two marquee matches that follow up this week's promos. This is the way, gentlemen! I'm so excited! I'm so... scared...
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 9, 2013 17:33:15 GMT -5
Finally, here are what points stand to be gained from this show. Antihero (+1) Boiler Room Brawler (+3) Jeremy Dupoe (+1) The Man they Call Asher (+5) Miscreant (+2) Seth Drakin (+1) Spiked Mohican (+2) Waffel113 (+1)
Furthermore, I plan to continue the proposed idea of awarding points to the match or promo that gets the most Likes, so there's more on the way.
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Post by bigrick0016 on Oct 9, 2013 19:57:29 GMT -5
BRB, you were right when you said that the idea was heretical (by the way, awesome word). I had to read it like 4 times because the idea was so foreign to me. Anyway, the idea sounds good
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 9, 2013 21:11:38 GMT -5
Ah yes, the new blood. The way I have Gookermania VI set up thus far, every member of the active roster is booked between the two weeks. That leaves you and I might have just the thing depending on certain factors.
Otherwise, if there are no objections, we have an official card for the next two weeks. I'll send her out tomorrow for voting. Saturday evening (6 PM CST) deadline.
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Post by bigrick0016 on Oct 9, 2013 23:46:42 GMT -5
I'm intrigued
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Post by The Man They Call Asher on Oct 9, 2013 23:53:05 GMT -5
Book it!
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 10, 2013 7:55:03 GMT -5
Part 1 card has been sent. Get to voting.
Now, do I have any writers? Again, the officially booked matches are the following:
Television Championship Michael Hayden versus TMK
Texas Death Match Antihero versus MiscreAnt
Tornado Elimination Tag for the Tag Team Championship Dream Team McLaren versus The Cult of the End
Don't forget that you can split up Match and Commentary writing duties. Bring your A-games because this is the big one. If it reads like you wouldn't pay money for it, then it's not good enough. I for one will be available to help with punching up a match, but others are invited to help too of course.
Let's get to it!
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Post by Gus Richlen Was Wrong on Oct 10, 2013 10:18:37 GMT -5
I might take the TV title match but I want to PM Hayden and TMK about something first.
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Post by The Man They Call Asher on Oct 10, 2013 11:29:21 GMT -5
Considering taking the tag match, but I'll wait and see if anyone else wants it first. If no one has taken it in say.. 24 hours, I'll write it.
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Post by Some Baritone guy IS REDEEMED! on Oct 10, 2013 14:32:17 GMT -5
I'll take the texas death match. (match only)
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Post by Waffel113 on Oct 10, 2013 14:41:54 GMT -5
As we may know, whenever Anti and I get together, good things happen. And therefore, I will take commentary on the Texas Death Match.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 10, 2013 17:05:32 GMT -5
Ah my man Waffel you took the one I wanted!
But seriously you can have it. Just if you can PM me your parts before you send to BRB. Just so I can add something if it needs it. Thanks, can't wait to see the magic you too can do.
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Post by Waffel113 on Oct 10, 2013 17:08:15 GMT -5
Trust me my man/ant, you saw what we did on the Best of Seven Series. You should know what we're capable of.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 10, 2013 17:29:57 GMT -5
And you are capable of some great stuff no doubt. Can't wait too see how you guys use a rivalry built like Misc/Anti's. But still will like to throw some of my own spice (promise not to take out anything nor bury Anti. Have too much respect for both of you to do so)
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Post by The Man They Call Asher on Oct 11, 2013 20:35:44 GMT -5
Well it seems I'll be writing the tag match then. Also it seems I wasn't included in the voting PM. Could we get that fixed, BRB?
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 11, 2013 22:59:04 GMT -5
Okay, so that's...
TV Championship Match: Gus Richlen Commentary: Gus Richlen
Texas Death Match Match: Antihero Commentary: Waffel113
Eight Man Tornado Tag Title Match Match: Asher Commentary: BRB
Expect results tomorrow night. And you're not on the list, eh, Asher? I'll fix that momentarily.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Oct 12, 2013 16:00:36 GMT -5
About two hours to go. If you haven't voted, do it as soon as possible. Deadline 6 PM.
Remember writers: you can write everything up until the finish. Okay, exception goes to Asher, seeing as it's an elimination match. Regardless, get ready. I plan to write match entrances and finishes as before. I'll send them out on Monday. Keep in mind that you're not obligated to use anything I sendto you. It's all suggestion and meant to give you a creative endpoint to reach so that matches are on time and therefore the shows are timely.
As for the unbooked, you can still write promos, squashes, etc for this show and you can treat this one like a go-home show for next week. Give it a try.
Good luck to all involved.
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Post by Waffel113 on Oct 12, 2013 16:18:51 GMT -5
NEW MEMBER YAY!
WELCOME TO FAWA RATETANKMARK!!
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