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Post by judodave on Dec 6, 2009 7:09:49 GMT -5
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Post by Red Impact on Dec 6, 2009 12:39:03 GMT -5
So, umm, what did he actually do? You say he's bland and put in a few NC puns in there, but you actually talk about him at all aside from his costume.
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Post by judodave on Dec 6, 2009 15:21:14 GMT -5
So, umm, what did he actually do? You say he's bland and put in a few NC puns in there, but you actually talk about him at all aside from his costume. Well I mentioned the electric sword (I think), it basically was a pretty damn powerful hand to hand weapon. He also had a bionic peg leg that allowed him to fly (don't ask me how). |
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Post by Red Impact on Dec 7, 2009 9:39:23 GMT -5
But what made him a lame villain? You said he was bland, but those two things don't make him sound bland, they make him sound quite awesome.
What I'm trying to get at is that you can't really just say a character is lame and expect us to get it, you have to show it. You spend half of the article talking about how cool his first costume is and then call him bland and are done with it. A bit more information on what he actually tried to do in his few appearances would have been nice.
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