Hey Guys, Little Help

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As you may or may not know I am a recently graduated journalism student. Some of the pieces that I published in my school's newspaper are actually eligible for awards, so I figured I'd at least give it a shot and submit some. Now, I won't bog you down with my news pieces, but I thought I could use a completely objective point of view for my feature writing/entertainment pieces. Thus, I have put several links to the articles I was thinking of submitting. Note, I can only go with one so if you guys could give me some feedback, I would appreciate it.

Here is the piece I was thinking of submitting:

www.newuniversity.org/2009/04/entertainment/vietnamese_come_to_the185/

(Looks like the online version of this got screwed up a little bit, note the article starts with the sentence "On the surface..." after all the retarded coding).

Here would be my second choice:

www.newuniversity.org/2009/01/entertainment/film_and_video_center176/

And these are some ones that would be eligible, but I probably won't go with:

www.newuniversity.org/2009/05/sports/the_uae_builds_bridges190/

www.newuniversity.org/2009/04/features/uc_student_regents_186/

www.newuniversity.org/2009/06/features/the_race_winds_down193/

Well, thanks to anyone willing to give feedback. Please, don't make any criticism too harsh. My self esteem's low enough

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I think I'd go with your gut and go with the Vietnamese one. Both read well, though.

Also, here's some little help.

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Nov 25, 2009 18:08:44 GMT -5 default said:

I think I'd go with your gut and go with the Vietnamese one. Both read well, though.

Also, here's some little help.

Thanks, also, lol I do have a match against Chavo later tonight so that should come in handy.

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too bad you're in California....I'm looking for people to contribute to my newspaper

anyways, I'd go with your gut

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Nov 25, 2009 21:02:28 GMT -5 bob said:

too bad you're in California....I'm looking for people to contribute to my newspaper

anyways, I'd go with your gut

Hey thanlks for the advice. Yeah, I kind of wish I was outside of CA myself. It's nice and all, but only one emoticon can properly describe our job market: