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Post by "Handsome" Whitey Fats on Jul 8, 2009 22:47:00 GMT -5
(NiteRaw promo after Heatz!) *From The Boiler Room*
Whitey!
How dare you interfere in my corporate business!
And how dare you demean the Heatz! Championship by helping Koda win his battles.
The Heatz! Championship should speak for itself, brother!
But because you've decided to sully its name,then I guess that I'll have to go you one better.
*BRB evilly smiles as he lifts up the Heatz! Championship belt, but it turns out to be a plastic replica*
*The camera zooms out to show a little boy, no more than 8 years old, crying*
See this little boy, Whitey?
Do you see his Heatz! Championship, Whitey?
Well see this!Little Boy: No! *BRB heads over to the furnace and opens it up and throws the belt in as the little boy bawls his eyes out*
Whitey, I have had it up to here with your hijinks, and for every Burning Hammer that you crush my skull with, I will end another child's innocence!
Stay out of my corporate business, Whitey!
And stay out of my ascension to the top of this fed, or it will be your innocence that I take!
*Little Boy continues crying*
*BRB picks up his pipe wrench*
Shut up!
*BRB grabs the little boy and escorts him offscreen* Woah, woah, woah...
Take my innocence? Bro, have you benn watching Do It To Me, You Naughty Sailor again? I helped Koda win, yes. But it's about time someone evened the odds against you and your Corporate lovers. And hell, I don't even know that kid.*hands the boy a metal belt, encrusted with jewels* Here son, that's pocket change to me now.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Jul 8, 2009 23:00:43 GMT -5
I'll have a promo for my upcoming match in a day or so. I like your promos, they're... unique. Thanks. I like to change font sizes to emphasize volume, and I like to make them bold to make it sound like he means serious business (as opposed to sounding casual - I suppose if a situation called for casualness then I for once wouldn't be typing it in bold font). If you want a good idea of what I hope my promos sound kinda like, try to imagine some strange hybrid of Mankind, Sid Justice, and Ric Flair.
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Jul 8, 2009 23:01:36 GMT -5
(NiteRaw promo after Heatz!) *From The Boiler Room*
Whitey!
How dare you interfere in my corporate business!
And how dare you demean the Heatz! Championship by helping Koda win his battles.
The Heatz! Championship should speak for itself, brother!
But because you've decided to sully its name,then I guess that I'll have to go you one better.
*BRB evilly smiles as he lifts up the Heatz! Championship belt, but it turns out to be a plastic replica*
*The camera zooms out to show a little boy, no more than 8 years old, crying*
See this little boy, Whitey?
Do you see his Heatz! Championship, Whitey?
Well see this!Little Boy: No! *BRB heads over to the furnace and opens it up and throws the belt in as the little boy bawls his eyes out*
Whitey, I have had it up to here with your hijinks, and for every Burning Hammer that you crush my skull with, I will end another child's innocence!
Stay out of my corporate business, Whitey!
And stay out of my ascension to the top of this fed, or it will be your innocence that I take!
*Little Boy continues crying*
*BRB picks up his pipe wrench*
Shut up!
*BRB grabs the little boy and escorts him offscreen* Woah, woah, woah...
Take my innocence? Bro, have you benn watching Do It To Me, You Naughty Sailor again? I helped Koda win, yes. But it's about time someone evened the odds against you and your Corporate lovers. And hell, I don't even know that kid.*hands the boy a metal belt, encrusted with jewels* Here son, that's pocket change to me now.Face Pop! ;D
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2009 23:01:52 GMT -5
I like to change font sizes to emphasize volume, and I like to make them bold to make it sound like he means serious business (as opposed to sounding casual - I suppose if a situation called for casualness then I for once wouldn't be typing it in bold font). If you want a good idea of what I hope my promos sound kinda like, try to imagine some strange hybrid of Mankind, Sid Justice, and Ric Flair. I thought you were doing that to make it sound like he was Whispering then Yelling
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Post by BoilerRoomBrawler on Jul 8, 2009 23:04:40 GMT -5
I like to change font sizes to emphasize volume, and I like to make them bold to make it sound like he means serious business (as opposed to sounding casual - I suppose if a situation called for casualness then I for once wouldn't be typing it in bold font). If you want a good idea of what I hope my promos sound kinda like, try to imagine some strange hybrid of Mankind, Sid Justice, and Ric Flair. I thought you were doing that to make it sound like he was Whispering then Yelling That's not too far from the truth actually. The small fonts mean that he's talking rather quietly, almost whispering in fact (watch Sid Justice/Vicious promos as he builds up), but the larger fonts are indeed yelling.
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Post by Koda, Master Crunchyroller on Jul 9, 2009 4:16:58 GMT -5
He's correct. Me and Koda were on the verge of a shot at the titles, and TheSam broke us up and we feuded until the last ppv. And I apologise for that. Don't apologize. You allowed us to do new things with our characters, and now we are both moving out of the cellar(as soon as I drop the Heatz! title).
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Post by thesam07 on Jul 9, 2009 4:20:57 GMT -5
And I apologise for that. Don't apologize. You allowed us to do new things with our characters, and now we are both moving out of the cellar(as soon as I drop the Heatz! title). Oh, well, in that case... (runs to Daves office) HEY DAVE! I don't want to say this but I heard Koda and Viva talking about starting a union Brother. They are gonna bury you and me Brother.
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Post by Viva on Jul 9, 2009 4:21:25 GMT -5
And I apologise for that. Don't apologize. You allowed us to do new things with our characters, and now we are both moving out of the cellar(as soon as I drop the Heatz! title). I concur with Koda, really. That feud really helped me find a tweener balance that I didn't have before. I'm not mad at what has transpired at all, really. It was beneficial to both of us. Post did come off negative though, not my intention at all. For that I apologize.
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Post by Koda, Master Crunchyroller on Jul 9, 2009 4:25:11 GMT -5
Don't apologize. You allowed us to do new things with our characters, and now we are both moving out of the cellar(as soon as I drop the Heatz! title). I concur with Koda, really. That feud really helped me find a tweener balance that I didn't have before. I'm not mad at what has transpired at all, really. It was beneficial to both of us. Post did come off negative though, not my intention at all. For that I apologize. Plus we both got two title reigns out of it.
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Post by Topher is Human on Jul 9, 2009 9:32:26 GMT -5
*Colt is getting interviewed, he is noticibly not wearing his trademark face mask or crown. Instead is holding the mask by his waist, slightly over his Tag Team Title.*
I... In... Next week on NiteRaw, the main event is between... My two friends... Wordlife, the self proclaimed most badass man around... And Above Average... The Inter-Forum Champion... The longest reigning Champion in history...
They will be fighting for that... that title... And just to mix things up... That snake... D-Day has put me in the referee position... Trying to stir things up between me and The Story... My bretheren... That won't happen.
I will referee this match... right down the middle. However that doesn't mean I won't allow a little foul play... I want the better man in this match. Because... What's a title anyway? The way I see it...
If you're not the better man... You're...
You're... Nothing.
*Colt throwns the Mask down and walks off, ashamed*
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Post by Topher is Human on Jul 9, 2009 10:05:16 GMT -5
I have an idea for a match.
The Beach Bash Battle Royal.
The ring is surrounded by water, and it's Elimination rules. To eliminate someone you have to throw the Legal Man into the water, over the top rope.
Can do Story vs Corporate for it if needed.
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Post by Square on Jul 9, 2009 10:22:31 GMT -5
I have an idea for a match. The Beach Bash Battle Royal. The ring is surrounded by water, and it's Elimination rules. To eliminate someone you have to throw the Legal Man into the water, over the top rope. Can do Story vs Corporate for it if needed. Or Square, Relegate Hunter, Whitey Fatts and Vs Corporate
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Post by Topher is Human on Jul 9, 2009 10:29:07 GMT -5
Hell make it a three team thing, make it special
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Post by Square on Jul 9, 2009 10:52:24 GMT -5
Hell make it a three team thing, make it special But you have no storyline with Corprate
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Post by Above Average on Jul 9, 2009 10:53:16 GMT -5
The Story have no storyline with Corporate?
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Post by Square on Jul 9, 2009 10:55:18 GMT -5
The Story have no storyline with Corporate? Which are still active now I meant
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Post by Above Average on Jul 9, 2009 10:58:09 GMT -5
Lies and tomfoolery.
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Post by Topher is Human on Jul 9, 2009 10:58:51 GMT -5
The Story have no storyline with Corporate? Which are still active now I meant Well I want revenge over Aaron's beating... so there But you do have a point that both my fued with Naitch and Cthulhu seemed to have wrapped up.
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Post by Square on Jul 9, 2009 11:00:41 GMT -5
Which are still active now I meant Well I want revenge over Aaron's beating... so there But you do have a point that both my fued with Naitch and Cthulhu seemed to have wrapped up. Maybe The Story should look at working with new talent/people that deserve a push (Koda)
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Post by Topher is Human on Jul 9, 2009 11:02:12 GMT -5
I would actually really enjoy working with Koda. Infact, I am officially challenging Koda and Legion to a match for next weeks show
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