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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 6, 2017 3:10:57 GMT -5
Interesting. It's actually the kind of info I'm looking for so what do you think I should add? (Note that in my defence, I'm deliberately giving as little descriptions as possible as I've got to admit I'm a bit paranoid about people outside the forums randomly finding this thread and stealing ideas) Im not an expert and only learned some stuff because I'm trying to write a comic or two myself. There are different types of panels size and structure depend on the type. For instance a splash panel where it takes up a whole page for a lot of action or a wide frame look of something would be called a splash panel in the script. And thought or word bubbles are usually written as such so the artist and inker can account for them. But usually most comic companies all have their own way of doing things. A dc script will look different than a marvel for example. And if you plan to draw it yourself the script is just a second resource so you can do it however you need to but i have had artists send stuff back with tons of notes because they need precise panels, exact number of bricks in a wall or how many creases there are in a shirt. But rather than just panel 1 panel 2 panel 3 etc id recommend taking advantage of the various types if panels. Just starting there would be a huge help as a reader. Ah, yes, makes sense. Well, indeed, I am going to draw it myself (I openly admit I am way better at drawing than writing) so I have a pretty good idea of what type of panel I want as I write them and the script is mostly there to keep track of how the dialogue and specific scenes go. I have actually doodles layouts for some of the pages to make sure I could get everything to fit. And the thing is, I feel like I need to know how many panels I'm gonna have each page before I pick the exact size of each one. Don't worry about splash panels, I just don't do them, except maybe as establishing shots. Never saw the point otherwise. It usually looks terrible because of the way pages are folded and it takes up unnecessary space when a half-page would do the job just fine. I'll be honest, as self-centred as it may sound, I don't really have readers in mind here as I mostly made this thread to keep me motivated to finish the script.After all, I want people to have an incentive to read the finished product. But yeah, if I was writing for another artist, I would definitely have to do it the way you described (which seems to be how pros do it from the few scripts I've been able to read). Thanks for your input, I'm always looking for advice like that!
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 6, 2017 12:17:23 GMT -5
PAGE 18 PANEL 1:Small panel of the wires firing from the gloves. PANEL 2:Lénore zipping back up. Lénore: (in a thought bubble) "Not that I particularly want to see corpses..." PANEL 3:Shot from inside the hallway the robot came from. Lénore turns her headlight back on. Lénore: (in a thought bubble) "...but how far could they all have made it?" PANEL 4:High-angle shot of Lénore walking down the hallway. PANEL 5:Lénore checks a corner turning left with her rifle drawn. PANEL 6:Front shot of Lénore reaching the end of the hallway. She looks intrigued. Lénore: "Well then, what do we have here?" PANEL 7:High-angle shot of Lénore approaching a metallic door in a somewhat large, rectangular room. To the east and west are two wooden doors. PANEL 8:The door is seen from the front, with Lénore observing it to the side. We can now see it is of a very different design to the first one. It is much smaller although still large enough to easily let two or three people through at the same time. It has no handle or wheel and instead of a keyhole, it has a thin slot. Lénore: (in a thought bubble) "Whatever is behind this must be very important." PANEL 9:Lénore presses her ear against the door PANEL 10:Close-up on her ear. She can barely hear voices but she can't make out what they're saying (shown by a tiny speech bubble with unreadable text). Lénore: (in a thought bubble) "There's people in there!" PANEL 11:Low-angle shot of Lénore looking at the door, having taken a step back. Lénore: (in a thought bubble) "Could the victims really still be alive?" PANEL 12:Close-up of Lénore looking pensive and with a more stern expression. Lénore: (in a thought bubble) "Unless, of course, it's whoever caught them." "Someone has to be maintaining these robots, after all."
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 7, 2017 14:38:39 GMT -5
PAGE 19 PANEL 1:Side view of Lénore talking into her radio. Lénore: "Gérald? Don't talk too loud but I've got some news for you." Gérald: "Really? What is it? PANEL 2:Front shot of Lénore contemplating the door, a hand on her hip. Lénore: "I'm pretty sure I've found the source of our problem." Gérald: "Excellent! Although something tells me there's a 'but...'" PANEL 3:Close-up of Lénore scratching her head. Lénore: "Yeah, it's behind a locked metal door." Gérald: "Darn! I don't suppose there is a way for you to force it?" PANEL 4:Side view of Lénore now resting her right elbow into her left hand in a pensive stance. Lénore: "Well, it's clearly a sliding door so it doesn't have any hinges to blow off" PANEL 5:Close-up on the keyhole, which shows the added detail of a round part in the middle of slot. Lénore: "Lockpicking isn't happening as the keyhole isn't the right kind of mechanism." PANEL 6:Close-up of the vials on Lénore's belt. Lénore: "As for explosives, I think all that'd do is jam it. Plus I'd rather not run the risk of alerting the robots or whoever is controlling them." PANEL 7:Back shot of Lénore looking at the door. Gérald: "So... what are you going to do?" Lénore: "Well, looks like I've got to find the key." PANEL 8:Perspective view of Lénore smirking Gérald: "Sounds like that might take a while." Lénore: "Yup! Hope you brought sandwiches."
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 8, 2017 13:10:20 GMT -5
PAGE 20 PANEL 1:Lénore seen from the back, her head turns towards the door to the left. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Alright, let's try this one." PANEL 2:Side view of Lénore shaking the handles on it Lénore: (thought bubble) "Locked. Of course." PANEL 3:Lénore now walks towards the one on the right. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Hopefully that one isn't." PANEL 4:Close-up of the door's leaves opening as she pushes them. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Good." PANEL 5:Perspective view of Lénore as she walks down another hallway. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Now, if the gods are being really nice to me..." PANEL 6:Close-up on another door. Lénore: (thought bubble) "... this will be where the key is." PANEL 7:Front shot of Lénore opening the door fully PANEL 8:Close-up on Lénore's face. She is beaming with happiness. PANEL 9:Close-up on a small metallic card with tiny sphere in the middle, propped upright on a stand which is lit up by Lénore's headlight. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Yes!! Finally my luck is turning!" PANEL 10:Front shot of Lénore happily picking taking the card out of the stand. The stand goes "click" as she does. PANEL 11:Back shot of Lénore reeling as large purple mist erupts from the stand.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 9, 2017 10:45:40 GMT -5
PAGE 21 PANEL 1:Lénore in the foreground, turning her head while covering her nose as she hears the door behind her slam close and makes a clicking noise. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Dammit! I'm trapped!" PANEL 2:Lénore puts on her mask as the room keeps filling with gas. Lénore: (thought bubble) "I have to act fast!" "Can't believe I was so careless." PANEL 3:Lénore dashes towards the door. PANEL 4:Lénore is kneeling to examine the door. She is visibly sweating. Lénore: (thought bubble) "I need to blow off the hinges, but the rifle alone won't do." PANEL 5:Close-up of Lénore pulling out the same vial as before. PANEL 6:Close-up of Lénore looking at the vial with a tiny bit of liquid left. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Should be just about enough." PANEL 7:Close-up of Lénore dropping the liquid on the hinges. PANEL 8:Low-angle shot of Lénore firing her rifle at the door. PANEL 9:The door gets blown off.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 10, 2017 10:53:30 GMT -5
PAGE 22 PANEL 1:Front shot of Lénore shambling out of the room, with smoke visible behind her. PANEL 2:Close-up of the side of Lénore's face, she is sweaty and looks tired. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Oh gods... looks like that gas hit me harder than I thought." PANEL 3:POV shot of Lénore looking at the open door back to the rectangular hall. The view is titled and blurry. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Gotta... make it back... there..." PANEL 4:Perspective view of Lénore struggling to get past the door. PANEL 5:Front shot of Lénore closing the door. PANEL 6:Side view of Lénore leaning against the door, taking her mask off. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Come on, girl... pull yourself together." PANEL 7:Close-up of Lénore grabbing another vial, this one containing small salt crystals. PANEL 8:Close-up of her putting one on her finger. PANEL 9:Front shot of Lénore snorting it. PANEL 10:Lénore with her back against the door, visibly relaxing. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Hhaaa... much better."
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 11, 2017 11:59:49 GMT -5
PAGE 23 PANEL 1:Low-angle view of Lénore talking into the radio. Lénore: "Gérald?" Gérald: "Yes? What happened? Are you okay?" PANEL 2:Perspective view of Lénore sitting down against the door Lénore: "Yeah. I'm okay. Almost wasn't, though." "Anyway, I've got the bloody key." PANEL 3:Close-up on the radio next to Lénore's ear. Gérald: "I'm glad to hear it! We'll finally be able to put this to rest." PANEL 4:Front view of Lénore, holding her head with her right hand. Lénore: "Hopefully. But if you don't hear from me within, say, twenty minutes..." "... well at least the next one will know on which corpse to find the key." PANEL 5:Lénore standing up. Gérald: "Don't say that, miss Céleste. After all you've been through, I can't believe you'll be stopped now." PANEL 6:Perspective view of Lénore standing in front of door with a small smirk on her face. Lénore: "If you say so." "Either way, like I said, I'm not sure what's behind that door, so don't make any noise until I contact you." Gérald: "Understood. Looking forward to it." PANEL 7:Side view of Lénore placing the radio back on her belt while pulling out the keycard. PANEL 8:Close-up of Lénore sliding the card inside the keyhole. PANEL 9:Back view of Lénore standing as steam comes out of the door's frame. PANELS 10, 11:The door sliding upwards.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 12, 2017 9:45:40 GMT -5
PAGE 24 PANEL 1:Side view of Lénore going through the door, with the locked Western door in the background. PANEL 2:Same view. A clicking noise comes from the locked door. PANEL 3:Still same view. The door opens slightly PANEL 4:Front view of Lénore walking down a hallway which goes on a downwards slope, her rifle in hand. PANEL 5:Same view as before, with Lénore lower down. And in the background, we can now see another robot. PANEL 6:Side view of Lénore looking around a corner. Light can be seen emitting from downstairs. Lénore: (Thought bubble) "Alright, this must be. I'm gonna have to take advantage of the element of surprise." PANEL 7:Front view of Lénore being grabbed by the robot's claws at the chest and hips. She drops her rifle in shock. PANEL 8:Side view of Lénore being pulled back. PANEL 9:Lénore slamming against the robot as the claws are completely pulled back. Lénore: "Gah!!" PANEL 10:Perspective view of the robot now dashing forwards. Lénore: "Oh shit oh shit oh shit!" PANEL 11:Low-angle view of Lénore and the robot entering the room Lénore was spying on earlier.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 13, 2017 11:40:49 GMT -5
PAGE 25 PANEL 1:Lénore is held tightly by the robot in the middle of the room while a dozen or so people in cloaks applaud. The room itself is covered wall to wall with drapes and mechanical parts. Cloaked person: "Congratulations!" Cloaked person 2: "Bravo!" PANEL 2:Close-up on Lénore looking extremely confused. Lénore: "Wuh... what?!" "What the Hell?!" PANEL 3:Front shot of Gérald walking towards her, also wearing a cloak. A large humanoid machine with a metallic cylinder forming its body can be seen behind him. Gérald: "Congratulations, miss Céleste! You have passed every trial!" Lénore: "Gérald?!" "What on Earth is going on?!" PANEL 4:High-angle view from behind the robot and Lénore of Gérald. Gérald: "I understand your confusion. Allow me to explain." "You see, you have been chosen." PANEL 5:Low-angle view of Lénore, staring right at Gérald, looking both shocked and angry. Lénore: "What are you going on about?! Chosen for what? By who?" PANEL 6:Gérald moves to the side and waves towards the machine, a smile on his face. PANEL 7:close-up of the cylinder opening. PANEL 8:Front view of the cylinder now fully open. The inside is covered in spikes covered in what looks like dried-up blood. PANEL 9:Low-angle view of Gérald's face, looking delighted, with Lénore staring at it in the background. Gérald: "By the Iron Goddess!" PANEL 10:Close-up of Lénore looking horrified.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 14, 2017 12:46:29 GMT -5
PAGE 26 PANEL 1:Gérald turns back to Lénore, whose head can be seen from the back. Gérald has an enthusiastic smile on his face. Gérald: "You see, years ago, the goddess sent the previous owner of this estate, the good doctor Châtelet, a vision, ordering him to build her physical form." PANEL 2:Lénore can be seen from the front, with Gérald in the foreground, waving an arm as he explains. Gérald: "This is why he came to us, to help his work for the Goddess." PANEL 3:Shot of several cultists, all smiling proudly. Gérald: "But for her to gain the power necessary to gain full control of her body, she needed sacrifices to feed her body." PANEL 4:Close-up on Lénore, her head tilted to the side. Lénore: "You... created an engine that runs on human blood?!" PANEL 5:Gérald gets right in Lénore's face, looking excited. Gérald: "Not just blood! The flesh and bones become the Goddess' sustenance as well! The people she honours become one with her!" PANEL 6:Close-up on Gérald turning around and looking fondly at the spiked cylinder. Gérald: "Châtelet, as her most fervent servitor, was the first to be granted this privilege. And soon, all of us will join her!" PANEL 7:Gérald turns around yet again, pointing energetically at Lénore Gérald: "But first!" PANEL 8:Front view of Lénore, with Gérald's finger pointing from outside the frame. Gérald: "You, miss Céleste, are the seventh and ultimate sacrifice!" PANEL 9:Side view of Gérald coming closer to Lénore, bursting with joy, almost in a trance. Gérald: "Only the Goddess' chosen one could have found the key to the door! You are the one to bring the Goddess to life! You have our eternal gratitude!"
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 15, 2017 11:47:52 GMT -5
PAGE 27 PANEL 1:Gérald motions towards a cultist who is at a panel in the background. Gérald: "Release her." PANEL 2:Small panel showing the cultist pressing a button. PANEL 3:The robot lets go of Lénore, who drops down. PANEL 4:Gérald comes right next to Lénore while waving towards the cylinder. Gérald: "Now, go and enjoy the honour that is bestowed upon you!" PANEL 5:Close-up on Lénore's face, looking with disgust at Gérald. PANEL 6:Lénore seen from the front, looking angrily at the cultists. Lénore: "What is wrong with you people?!" "You've been sacrificing people to machine, and now you expect me to climb in a freaking iron maiden?!" PANEL 7:Shot of some of the cultists, looking shocked at her outburst. PANEL 8:high-angle close-up on Lénore, looking furious. Lénore: (thought bubble) "I need to find a way to get out of here." "Can I take them before they rush me? They don't exactly look like fighters." PANEL 9:Perspective view of Gérald, with Lénore looking around in the foreground. Cultist: "Gérald, are you sure she's the one?" Gérald: "Yes" "Miss Céleste, I had hoped that, being the ultimate sacrifice, you would see the Goddess' wisdom and that it wouldn't come to this." PANEL 10:Gérald turns his head towards the same man as before. Lénore also turns towards him. Gérald: "Do it."
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 16, 2017 11:49:13 GMT -5
PAGE 28 PANEL 1:Front view of the man at the panel about to press the button, with Lénore shooting a wire and slapping it around his wrist. Lénore: "Oh no, you don't!" PANEL 2:Perspective view where Lénore pulls the man towards her. PANEL 3:Low-angle shot of Lénore standing on the man with a foot on him to keep him in place. PANEL 4:Shot of the cultists drawing guns and pointing that Lénore. PANEL 5:Gérald in the foreground, raising his arms, with Lénore in the background. Gérald: "Everyone, please! Calm down! We cannot harm the ultimate sacrifice!" "We must honour the Goddess' will." PANEL 6:Full-body shot of Lénore still standing on the guy. Lénore: "Yeah, and the Goddess has a change of plan! She wants you guys to get the Hell out of here!" PANEL 7:Front view of an angry cultist aiming at Lénore Lénore: "She's making a mockery of the Goddess!" "She's not the ultimate sacrifice, she is nothing but a lucky charlatan!" PANEL 8:Close-up of the rifle firing. Gérald: "NO!!" PANEL 9:Front view of Lénore reeling back as the bullet lands in her vest. PANEL 10:Close-up of Lénore wincing as her head hits a button on the panel.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 17, 2017 11:30:44 GMT -5
PAGE 29 PANEL 1:Close-up of the robot winding up a fist. PANEL 2:Side view of Gérald angrily walking towards the shooter, passing in front of the robot as he does. Gérald: "Don't you realise what you nearly did?!" PANEL 3:Side view of the robot punching Gérald Gérald: "We cannot harm the ultimate sacrifice befo-GAAAH!!" PANEL 4:Perspective view of the Gérald being knocked into the cylinder. We can't see it, but it makes a sickening "SCHLOK!" as he hits the spikes. Gérald: "AAAAAH!!" PANEL 5:Perspective view of the cylinder's doors slamming shut. PANEL 6:Close-up on a female cultist clutching at her head as she screams. Cultist: "NNOOOO!! He's not the ultimate sacrifice!" "The Goddess' body will be corrupted!" PANEL 7:Close-up of the machine's "face". Steam comes out of various holes. PANEL 8:Side view of the cultists rushing out of the room, the same woman motioning to them to escape. In the foreground, seen from the back, Lénore is recovering while nursing the back of her head. Cultist: "Everybody get out! The Goddess' blessing will become a curse!" Lénore: "Oww..." PANEL 9:Lénore in the foreground sees the machine starts to rise up. Lénore: "Oooh, crap. That can't be good." PANEL 10:High-angle view of the machine now fully standing, its head almost touching the ceiling. Lénore: "That can't be good at all."
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 18, 2017 16:13:50 GMT -5
PAGE 30 PANEL 1:Side view of the machine reaching its hand towards Lénore. PANEL 2:Side-view of Lénore rolling out of the way and towards the side of the machine that is now showing its back. PANEL 3:High-angle view of Lénore shooting a wire into the machine's back. Lénore: (thought bubble) "I've got to destroy this thing!" "Somehow." PANEL 4:Front view of Lénore placing herself on the machine's back, the wire still hooked to the metal. Large tubes come from the body and connect to the limbs. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Okay, so I'm guessing these pipes connect everything to the main engine. So if I can cut the-" PANEL 5:Side view of the machine suddenly jumping through the ceiling. PANEL 6:Low-angle view of Lénore dangling from the wire attached to the machine, looking down as it goes through the air and debris brushes by her. Lénore: "Oh gods! Oh gods! oh gods!" PANEL 7:High-angle view of Lénore zipping up while drawing the blade of the glove on her free hand. PANEL 8:Close-up of Lénore digging the blade deeply into the machine's metal. PANEL 9:Low-angle view of Lénore holding on to the machine. Her right hand secured by the wire, her left stabbing the machine and her feet planted into into it by tiny spikes.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 19, 2017 13:01:52 GMT -5
PAGE 31 PANEL 1:Full-body view of the machine landing heavily, revealing that it is now outside the mansion. PANEL 2:Left side view of Lénore hanging on for dear life as everything shakes around her. PANEL 3:Close-up on one of the pipes. Lénore: (thought bubble) "I need to get back to those pipes! Sever them, stop the machine." PANEL 4:Right side view of Lénore detaching her right arm from the machine. PANEL 5:Close-up on the right glove's blade sliding out. PANEL 6:High-angle view of Lénore using the blades to climb up. PANEL 7:Side view of the machine bending back. Inside it as a close-up panel of Lénore's face. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Wait! What's going on now?!" PANEL 8:Perspective view of the machine quickly bending forward, launching Lénore in the air. Lénore: "AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!" PANEL 9:Back view of Lénore launching a wire towards a nearby tree. PANEL 10:Close-up on the wire slapping and wrapping itself around a thick branch. PANEL 11:Perspective view of Lénore spinning around the branch due to the momentum. Lénore: "Woooaah!!" "Woah!" PANEL 12:Back view of Lénore dropping down, with the machine running away in the distance. Lénore: (thought bubble) "No no no no no! It's moving towards the city! I can't let it get away!"
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 20, 2017 11:14:19 GMT -5
PAGE 32 PANEL 1:Perspective view of Lénore's bike, with her running towards it in the background. PANEL 2:Back view of Lénore sitting on the bike, with the machine running towards the town in the background. PANEL 3:Front view of Lénore driving, bending forward. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Come on. I can do this!" PANEL 4:Low-angle view of Lénore getting closer to the machine PANEL 5:Side view of Lénore getting past the machine, which notices her. PANEL 6:Front view of the machine punching the ground where Lénore was, with her drifting out of the way in the foreground. PANEL 7:Perspective shot of Lénore shooting her right hand wire. PANEL 8:Close-up of the wires hitting the machine's right shoulder, next to one of the pipes. PANEL 9:High-angle view of Lénore zipping towards the machine, her left hand glove having its blade out. PANEL 10:Left side view of Lénore reaching the machine and stabbing deep into the pipe.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 21, 2017 14:25:34 GMT -5
PAGE 33 PANEL 1:Back view of Lénore slashing away. A large cloud of steam comes out of the gash. PANEL 2:Right side view of Lénore winding up her arm for a second slash. PANEL 3:Low angle view of Lénore slashing again, severing the pipe completely. PANEL 4:Full-body view of the machine thrashing around, although its right arm is no longer moving. PANEL 5:Side view of the machine's left hand trying to squash Lénore like a bug, while she avoids it by zipping towards the machine's head. PANEL 6:Side view of Lénore jumping off the head and towards the left shoulder. PANEL 7:Perspective view of her landing just above the pipe PANEL 8:Front view of Lénore sitting over the base of the pipe, she is winding up both her fists. PANEL 9:Close-up of both blades stabbing the pipe. PANEL 10:Back view of Lénore slashing, cutting the pipe in one go.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 22, 2017 14:12:18 GMT -5
PAGE 34 PANEL 1:Back view of Lénore dropping down from the now dangling arm, with the severed pipe flailing around, as the machine raises its left foot. PANEL 2:Perspective view of Lénore dodging out of the way and running towards the back of the machine while also shooting a wire towards one of the right leg pipe. Lénore: (thought bubble) "Don't know if I'll be able to go on much longer, I need to end this now!" PANEL 3:High angle view of the wire wrapping itself around the pipe. PANEL 4:Perspective view of Lénore climbing on the base of that pipe. PANEL 5:Left side view of Lénore slapping her right hand wire around the right leg pipe. PANEL 6:Front view of Lénore quickly slashing at the pipe she's on, with Steam once again coming out of the gash. Her right arm is in the direction of the other pipe. PANEL 7:Perspective view of Lénore zipping towards the left leg pipe. PANEL 8:Front view. Similarly to before, she climbs the pipe while winding up her right hand. PANEL 9:Close-up of her slashing at the pipe. PANEL 10:Lénore standing on the base of the pipe. She is sweating profusely and breathing heavily. Lénore: (thought bubble) "It's all or nothing."
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 23, 2017 11:39:27 GMT -5
PAGE 35 PANEL 1:Low angle view of Lénore jumping in the space between the two pipes, her arms raised over her head. PANELS 2 & 3:Close-up of the wires shooting from both gloves. PANEL 4:Large front view panel showing Lénore landing between the machine's legs, her wires whipping the pipes where they've been gashed, finishing the job of cutting them both at once. PANEL 5:Same view, but with the wires now on the ground and the pipes waving around as steam bursts out of them. PANEL 6:Front view of the machine stumbling over due to its legs now being disabled. PANEL 7:Same view, with the machine having completely fallen over and Lénore visible in the background.
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Post by SsnakeBite, the No1 Frenchman on Mar 24, 2017 10:52:22 GMT -5
PAGE 36 PANEL 1:Perspective view of Lénore turning around towards the downed machine, dripping sweat and breathing heavily PANEL 2:Far shot of her admiring her work, her hands on her hips. PANEL 3:Same shot, Lénore now has her hands raised in celebration. Lénore: "YEAAAH!!" "Freaking did it!" PANEL 4:Close-up of Lénore face with a big doofy smile on her face. Lénore: "Hhaaaaa..." PANEL 5:Same shot, but with her falling out of frame. Lénore: "... oooooowwww." PANEL 6:Bird's eye view of Lénore falling on the machine. PANEL 7:Close-up on her face, still smiling, with her eyes almost closed. PANEL 8:Same shot, with sirens audible in the distance. Lénore: "Heh. Finally noticed the giant robot stomping around in the middle of the road, did ya, lads?" PANEL 9:Back view of Lénore still lying on the machine as police cars arrive. Lénore: "Good to know you guys..." "... are always..." "... on top of things."
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